November is a big month for Grade 12 students who are starting the process to apply for universities. Writing the perfect application essay becomes very important, as this is the first impression for the students to make to the universities. 十一月对于12年级的学生来说是重头月,他们就要开始申请大学了。写就一篇成功的申请信就格外重要,因为这将是学生给大学招生办老师留下的第一印象。 college-application-essay slr-lounge-website-tips-henson-creative mba_applications_essay_tips_articled My advice from a professional educational guidance friend is to remember that you are an impressive character , not just a topic. The subject of the essay is you and the topic is secondary. The key here is to be reflective, show lessons learned, and allude to the future. 我从一个从事专业教育指导的朋友那儿得到的建议是:切记-你自己才是主角,一定要展示你自己的人格魅力,而不仅仅是一个话题。申请信的中心应该是你,要讲什么是次要的。这里的关键点是你要写你自己从事件和学习中懂得思考,学到经验或教训,从而展望未来。 _dsc9177 A university application essay is your opportunity to share something meaningful about yourself and show what you’ve learned, not what you did. It would be seen as a chance to tell people who may never meet you. It is a time for them to get to know who you are. 大学申请信是给你一个机会,让你分享自己可圈可点的地方,传递出自己学到了什么、成长了什么,而非做了什么。这也是一个向那些从没见到过你的人展现才气、见解和思想的契机,让他们了解你是怎样的人。 _dsc9053 The essay does not have to be about something huge or a life-changing event you experienced. You can write about an ‘a-ha’ moment, and about who you are and what defines you as a person. What are some meaningful things to you? What did the experience mean to you? These are what admission counselors want to know. 论文无需高谈阔论,或者谈那些你经历过的改变你人生的大事。你可以写一些让你茅塞顿开的一刻,讲讲自己的特质,自己是怎么样的人。什么事物对你有意义?那些经历对你有什么影响?这些才是招生顾问想要知道的。 _dsc9323 %e6%9c%aa%e6%a0%87%e9%a2%98-2 Be impressive! Best wishes to all the students for your wonderful future ! 你是最独特的!衷心祝愿所有的学生有美好的前程! angela-signature2-a-moved-out


Angela Bi is an international citizen who has lived both in Shanghai and Vancouver Canada. She’s worked in immigration for over a decade and has experienced first hand the joys of living overseas. Angela Bi 是生活在中国上海及加拿大温哥华两地的世界公民。她从事专业移民行业已有十余载,并掌握着旅居海外的一手乐活体验。

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